JigokuNeko on May 5th, 2009, 1:11 pm
*hmm, are the screentones good? i don't know: static scenes are ok on first try but i get through hell when it comes to action
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CPD on May 5th, 2009, 4:58 pm
they look fine to me ^_^
StellaCadente on May 6th, 2009, 8:17 am
To me it looks okay! I love the way you screentone your comics... Yeah, action scenes are a hell to do!
Hmm... I feel like he's gonna get into some trouble. Perhaps he's gonna make some contract that will turn out something bad...
annhell on May 6th, 2009, 10:03 am
Lookin' great so far *thumbs up* I love that you're using gradients to convey a sense of depth, and you balance the toned and white spaces so well.
One gripe though, you might try adding some noise with photoshop at the top part (the people on top, actually), where the toning is very smooth grey. Adding abit of noise or some textured tones would blend it in better with the rest =3 Just my humble opinion xD